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Grant me Riddance by Valesco Grant me Riddance by Valesco
Hi there,

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I am very glad for every comment and suggestion how to improve!
Thanks to you!
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:iconprofessorpeyton:
ProfessorPeyton Featured By Owner May 14, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, that's a lot of detail.
I love the wing things as well. Pretty cool.
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:iconwulfnstein:
wulfnstein Featured By Owner May 13, 2011
looks cool. What I see is, I think, the use of different layers for the cloth the body, hair and other stuff. My suggestion. try drawing on one layer. It'll make the different things blend togheter in a nicer way. Right now it still looks to much like different layers. I like the concept though, you got some good skills at work here. So keep up the good work :)
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KatieBratchell Featured By Owner May 13, 2011
This is beautiful (:
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:icondee-na:
dee-NA Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
the detail on this is truly amazing !!! and the colours are just outstanding. it really captures the eye
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Skystalker Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Oh gosh! :wow: VERY impressive work here! The clouds are awesome, the pose is unique and tells a story...

The shading/lighting seems a bit rough in some areas, and that...right knee, I'm NOT sure if I'm right on this, but the kneecap area just seems off to be for some reason. ^^; I'm still studying myself so I may not know what I'm talking about here.

Incredible job though! :)
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ayyk92 Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmm cloud background looks real good and the hair rendering is nice, but the muscle shading needs some work. The skin looks sorta loose and baggy imo
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:iconvalesco:
Valesco Featured By Owner May 14, 2011  Hobbyist
thanks for the critique!
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:iconjpjordan:
JPJordan Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
your wing design is pretty awesome :)
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Ghostiy Featured By Owner May 13, 2011
IB Awesome! im in love with those wings. The pose is amazing and i generally really like the feeling of the whole thing.

Maybe soften the shading in some areas, or make it a bit more subtle. Especially the knees, since they look a little detached from the rest of the leg. You got the places to shade right though 8D

over all, im impressed <3
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:iconvalesco:
Valesco Featured By Owner May 14, 2011  Hobbyist
is also intended to make the shading stand out even more :D i think this is a matter of style then ;)
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:iconghostiy:
Ghostiy Featured By Owner May 14, 2011
porobably C: the only thing that id really change is the knees. the way youve done sort of swirly shading on them makes them a teeny bit deformed.
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:iconrmr34:
rmr34 Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful work. =D
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:iconinvinciblesoul:
InvincibleSoul Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great work! Love the wings! Really has a kind of religious feel to it.
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:iconvalesco:
Valesco Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Hobbyist
thanks :D ooh religious...i am very fond of displaying scenes where god's cruel, (even if i am a declared atheist)...don't know if that came to your mind in that sense aswell.would be nice to know!
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:iconinvinciblesoul:
InvincibleSoul Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It did actually:) Kind of reminds me of some scenes from "Bayonetta" if you are familiar with the game...
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:iconvalesco:
Valesco Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Hobbyist
hm i just heard of that game, that it is quite...japanese :D and not easy to deal with as an european, since it is so bright, loud and flippy :D. my friends tossed it away directly after they got it.
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InvincibleSoul Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You have to get used to it I guess:) But it's pretty cool once you get into it. Really nice character designs.
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Kappayi Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I love the concept, especially how the wings are disattached (is that even a word? >.>) to him. The background really gives that cloudy atmosphere, and the reddish tint shows that he's in pain.

Awesome piece.
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:iconvalesco:
Valesco Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Hobbyist
hey thanks! especially for the interpretation !
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HENSHINAGOGOBABY Featured By Owner May 13, 2011
Brilliant! I love the detail on the wings!
I can't really tell you how to improve it! ^^ It's great
(and i'm no expert!) Well done!
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Valesco Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Hobbyist
thanks very much!
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